you can't stay s.o.b.e.r for
one night can you, babydoll?
i swear..
i'm sick of your
(sloppy kisses
&& midnight hickeys)
&& i hate the way you make me
*cut* my >>pretty little teenage wrists<<
remember i let you
s
l
i
d
e your hand
d
o
w
n
my jeans?
that was a [fucking] //mistake\\
darling, you're never going to be my r.o.m.e.o
&& i'm never being your j.u.l.i.e.t
Please tell me what you think
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luved the ending and the begnning, the middle is okay short & sweet but oh so relatable!
i'm sick of your
(sloppy kisses
&& midnight hickeys)
mmm luv those lines orginal & creative!
x-amount of words
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i love the ultimatum at the end. good write
cookies for you
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sorry had to comment again.. it's extreme
god i want to fuck you.
heehee
and i mean that in the purdiest way possible. -
awesome awesome babydoll;;
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"&& i hate the way you make me
*cut* my >>pretty little teenage wrists<<
remember i let you
s
l
i
d
e your hand
d
o
w
n
my jeans?"
oOoOoOo baby doll you rock my world to the core and back..
slide your hand down my pants cuz you'd make me gasp
&& i love you
♥
-alexsis
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you think that this sucks?
ARE YOU KIDDING ME, BOO!?
i need to come over there & slap you =]
this was AMAZING, baby. NO JOKE.
i loved it.
but i still love you more ♥
p.s. be in my ap famille? -
i'm sick of your
(sloppy kisses
&& midnight hickeys)
&& i hate the way you make me
*cut* my >>pretty little teenage wrists<<
loveeeeee
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"remember i let you
s
l
i
d
e your hand
d
o
w
n
my jeans? "
Wow...that part reallyyyy hit home for me,
because I've done things similar to that in the past [with someone other than my boyfriend] and I can't forgive myself for it. I know that's not what you're saying here, but it just made me think about it.
"i'm sick of your
(sloppy kisses
&& midnight hickeys)"
LOVE that stanza!
Keep it up babe;; you just keep getting better & better<333
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This is an excellent poem doll;; I love it. I love how you dropped some of your words (thats my favorite part
) And your placement of random punctuation is wonderful love;; Absolutely wonderful dirty pretty write...feel free to enter more...no limit.
Great job, thanks for entering!
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remember i let you
s
l
i
d
e your hand
d
o
w
n
my jeans?
that was a [fucking] //mistake\\
darling, you're never going to be my r.o.m.e.o
&& i'm never being your j.u.l.i.e.t
i could relate to that on so many levels
i def felt this one hunny pie
&& it did NOT suck lol your sweetness keep writing!
♥
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ohhh I love this doll!!!
its amazing!!!!
"that was a [fucking] //mistake\\
darling, you're never going to be my r.o.m.e.o
&& i'm never being your j.u.l.i.e.t"
LOVE IT!!
you just blow me away!
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darling, you're never going to be my r.o.m.e.o
&& i'm never being your j.u.l.i.e.t
This is amaze doll
I love it && ily
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