I gladly
Lay my soul bare before you
The softness of my core
Knowing you’ll touch it with gentle hands
And that there is no shame in nakedness with you
No hesitation
The familiarity of being known
Is the greatest truth
The strongest certainty of life
The fullness of who I am meshing with you
And where
Does my being end and yours begin
As we share an intimacy so far beyond
The physical and superficial
How could I ever find something more real
than this?
A contest entry
- In Love's Arms by perdisbeaute.
800 points, ended March 16, 2007, 12 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful. I can completely relate to this. When I am with my love I feel so certain of everything and so full of love. This is a great write. I love it!


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oh, i really love this. It speaks of how love should really be at times like that. Total acceptance and no shame to hide. Really great write!
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