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All Seeing Glass

I see through your heart
I see into your Soul
I feel your touch
I scare you
I see if you go
To heaven
To hell
I am the all seeing spirit
Of Darkness
Of Light
I walk the line
Between Life
Between Death
I see your future
I see your present
I see your past
I wander the halls of your school
Of your Home
Of your world
I see what music you like
You love
I see what you care for
What you hate
What you Love
I see the streams you float on
The fire you walk through
The things you yearn
I see everything
The here
The now
The then
The when
You see as I said
I
me
no one else
am the seeing eye

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  • Trixie08
    March 22, 2007

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    WOW!

    ENJOYABLE! ENJOYABE! ENJOYABLE! You call this is an enjoyable poem?? You have no idea; this piece is one of the...........................................best pieces I've read in a long time!!!! I loved it and words can't describe why. The flow and the overall theme of your poem was just beautiful. And if no one else besides me and AngieMaire can see the beauty in it then screw everybody!!! Great Write!!!


  • Angierie
    March 16, 2007
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    I love the repetition!

    Great write.. it's so relatable!

    Angie