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Gain

Why do you feel so distant
when you sit 3 seats away?
alone in thought, consumed in work
I wish you knew my name

your face lights up, your eyes are bright
I wish I knew just what to say
I want your hand and soft pink lips
but instead we play this game

when you laugh, your dimples show
they liven up my day
your arms are long and slender
a hug from you would take away my pain.

I think I'll write you a love note
and tell you I love you, and that I'm gay
but I'm scared, of losing what little I have
of you, but there is so much to gain..

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 16, 2007

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    I think I'll write you a love note
    and tell you I love you, and that I'm gay
    but I'm scared, of losing what little I have
    of you, but there is so much to gain..


    you always leave with something strong, i like that about your poems, keep it flowing


    • aikoflavored
      March 17, 2007
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      Thank you!
      I really apreciate it.
      you're sweet. I look forward to your comments.