Never the one to seduce another's woman's man
This I have to make an exemption
I see the pain she leaves in your eyes
I see the story you want to tell
It pains me to see you this way
We all deserve happiness right?
I want to be the sunshine in your world full of clouds
To restore the broken spirit that is you
At night my body whispers to you
To my taut nipples
Down to the wetness between my legs
Don't you hear me calling?
I only wish to be able to curl my fingers into your hair
Be able to kiss the sweetness that is your lips
To able to touch you
Taste you
Become apart of you
Don't you see?
What you’re doing to me?
In a list
A contest entry
- Seduce Me (Woman only ) by King Neirad.
700 points, ended March 29, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
Wow, this is really good. So descriptive. AWesome! -
loved that
i like girl ur so talented

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Dangedy dang dang dang! You are the vixen, I know you are. Oh, I am so jealous of King Neirad right now I could... nevermind. Let's just say that I like the way you wrote this! Three more bunnies dressed in matching leather teddies!


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Alluring
Amazing. I just had to take a moment there, to gather my thoughts about this one! Very well written! Ive definitely been seduced by your words. I like the yearning expressed that's exactly what I was looking for! So thank you very much. Very hot poem, very alluring. You must have a natural talent of seduction
Thanks so much for entering!
-King





