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Sweet Seduction

Never the one to seduce another's woman's man
This I have to make an exemption
I see the pain she leaves in your eyes
I see the story you want to tell

It pains me to see you this way
We all deserve happiness right?
I want to be the sunshine in your world full of clouds
To restore the broken spirit that is you

At night my body whispers to you
To my taut nipples
Down to the wetness between my legs
Don't you hear me calling?

I only wish to be able to curl my fingers into your hair
Be able to kiss the sweetness that is your lips
To able to touch you
Taste you
Become apart of you

Don't you see?
What you’re doing to me?

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  • MoonlightBeam
    March 16, 2007
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    wow

    Wow, this is really good. So descriptive. AWesome!


  • Sexxy-ghetto-bezy
    March 16, 2007
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    loved that

    i like girl ur so talented


  • PerVirtuous
    March 16, 2007
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    Dangedy dang dang dang! You are the vixen, I know you are. Oh, I am so jealous of King Neirad right now I could... nevermind. Let's just say that I like the way you wrote this! Three more bunnies dressed in matching leather teddies!


  • King Neirad
    March 16, 2007

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    Alluring

    Amazing. I just had to take a moment there, to gather my thoughts about this one! Very well written! Ive definitely been seduced by your words. I like the yearning expressed that's exactly what I was looking for! So thank you very much. Very hot poem, very alluring. You must have a natural talent of seduction Thanks so much for entering!

    -King