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File me Away.

File me away
    in a cabinet
  in a folder

Lock me up
    in a cage
  in a safe


                Throw away
            the keys
          and
                          me.

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  • Isabel Cult
    March 28, 2007
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    Wow. I love this... I feel like I can relate to it somehow. Amazing <3


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    March 17, 2007

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    (Exhale through the right nostril slowly)


    Hmmmmmmmmm....


    Lock you up...

    Throw away the keys...

    No, please don't let them do this. Good poem, wrong action.

    Save thyself.

    Translate this to: we need your file in very high places right now. No excuses. You are important.

    (Now where's that clerk? Clerks are so very vital to the whole process of salvaging the crucial fact!!)


    • aikoflavored
      March 17, 2007
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      Lol, yes but sometimes I wish people would lock me up and get rid of me, sometimes I do stuff that makes me not deserve to be alive, or so I feel.

      just a mood I was in.
      I'm bi-polar, and if my parents believed in medication
      and were home enough to notice, I would be on medication.

      but I'm not.
      so I have a hard time, at school and with friends and yeah.
      it sucks.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 16, 2007

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    no that is something i can't do, your poems are too fun, lol, this is a sad but i will admit this is something that has gotten to me, keep it flowing


    • aikoflavored
      March 17, 2007
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      lol. this poem is really simple. I feel like I need to add more to it.
      what do you think?

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