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Blood Red Summer

In love.
Two years it's been for you and me.
In love.
I cut, you knew. Goodbye you said to me.

Painfully shy the next time we meet.
You and this girl.
I see you, you see me. You grab her and kiss.

We were best friends.
Her and I.
You and me.
We were in love.
You and me.

I ran
    ran
        ran
until I had to stop for air.

You took a knife, I took a knife. Sliced my wrist.

Pain is sharp.
Pain is red.
Summer after summer
I think of you.
I want to
I need to
I want to be dead.

Author notes

It may not show pain well, but my heart is about to burst.

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  • Whoochi gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    I hope your heart heals and you move on with Life and get over HIM & HER...I know it sounds cliche..but a guy is so not worth your life...Be the best that you can be...Life has so much to offer....Peace & Blessings! Good luck...


  • bitter scarecrow
    March 16, 2007
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    very good piece

    reminds me a little bit of my poems, i guess i can relate. good job


    • emilie-x
      March 17, 2007
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      Thanks!

      Thanks for the appluads and comment!!! I'm going to have to read yours if they're similar!