Can you heal this rift in my heart?
Why, in the first place, did you rip it apart?
I thought you loved me, our love was so true
But you left me quite downhearted, my complexion blue
Gasping for air, can’t take it in
Didn’t you know killing is a sin?
what first pops into your head when you read this?
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oh yes I'm sure yours did, and I'm sure mine did... not that that stopped them from doing it of course...man, I hate men and what they do to people, honestly!
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i loved this, every line was awesome. i loved every line of the poem, just too awesome for words, keep writing and i look forward to reading more of your poems..
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Wow!
This is a really good poem. It's short, but straight to the point. I definitely liked how you ended it. Keep up the great work!
♥,
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Awh. That's cute
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i love this poem....it is very great!!!
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