A Slice Of Rainbow
Slice Of A Rainbow
Author notes
I don't want to win a trophy without care for how'd I do...
"Please don't use my name in your reviews" is a contest rule request.
SplishSplashPencil, if you know who I am, please remove my entry.
Explanation of it : First, Pink is thinly of color spectrum for the association to herself's facet of serving food
and
that more strongly can be associated with the irrigation's timer banner by which bountiful might still be looked upon somewhat.
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Soft And Understandable
Hello on the date I'll give out trophies,
A pretty interjection you have made in, "A Slice Of Rainbow." Pink Blossom Camper can only get a small portion of what all the rain nurtures the ground to provide healthy meals... her restaurant won't even be as large as a town even though the town's people might all come to her once in a while. And, I really like the statement that in a dim rainbow, there could be spots of pink blended in. I think this sounds a little too bumpy right at first in criteria, so "Slice Of A Rainbow" works better for me!
Thank you so much for entering.
Even though my contest WILL be judged TODAY, I still want to remind you that mine is anonymous and ask you not to reply or rate my comment 'till it's over. You can talk in your author notes though, it's up to you.
2:58 talking,
SplishSplashPencil
P.S. I loved how you mixed up the red-oranges and the pinks to form a unique match to the background.
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