Candy, candy, oh so sweet
Sugary, a sticky-treat
Rolling them from cheek to cheek
M&M’s make me go weak
Snorting powder, Pixie Sticks
An addiction you can’t ever fix
Cotton candy, fluffy-light
Pulling it apart just feels so right
Peppermints, red and white
What a taste, what a sight!
Don’t try to cure me
Of my candy-addiction
Don’t try to free me
From this sugar-tongue friction
A contest entry
- Candy-Licious!! by Phoenix-Flame.
320 points, ended March 30, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Glitter Glam Whores (Myspace: 1) by Moonshinesuicide.
300 points, ended April 17, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my love for candy!
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oh psst: could you please put your author name in the notes
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wow that made me hungry
this was great, loved the ending, 'sugar-friction' ahh lakkkke
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candy is good i loved your poem about it, the way you ended it was kool and i loved it, keep penning
~Ashley~<3 -
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AWSOME POEM!!!i loved this poem!Candy sounds so good right now!I especialy like the ending part"Don't try to cure me
Of my candy'addiction
Don't try to free me
From this sugar'toung friction"
awsome!!!
<333Elhe93<333
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I love candy too! Man....now I want sugar...PIXI STIX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cool!
after eading this i wanted candy. you truly cuaght what i was looking for -
wow after reading this poem i have a sudden craving for candy lol. I just love mm's.
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