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love you

My darling how I love you,
My love for you so true,
Our love is everlasting,
Of this I tell you,

Embraces from the heavens,
Laughter from our hearts,
Sweeping emotions,
Deep within our souls,

My love for you my darling,
Must be written down,
My love for you re-told,
    I love you!

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  • The Countess
    December 15, 2008
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    yes pain and heartache rule the day.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 24, 2007
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, Josephine


  • Sweetangelgrace
    March 17, 2007

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    Wowwwww...I have never known a guy to be able to turns his feelings that are as strong as yours into words as powerful as they way you have worded your emotions. from your poem you seem like a great guy so i hope everything works out in your love life. hope i am able to read more of your poems!


    ~~GRACE~~

  • The Countess
    March 16, 2007

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    Quite Lovely

    Love the 'Laughter from the heart' line, one usually assosiattes heart ache/pain with writings of Love.
    Bravo!


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    March 16, 2007
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    This is so very sweet
    a charming piece..
    Best of luck to you..


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    March 16, 2007
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    awww this is soo sweet!! love romantic guys!! lol...great job!
    MINDIE


  • Ice queen 17
    March 16, 2007
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    awww

    awww this is really sweet. I like it a lot. great job. thnks for entering. Good luck

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