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Sorry

Oh! how I wish to say Sorry,
For all the misdoings I've maid,
For not obeying your will,
instead I go astray.

I know sorry is not enough:
Yet, I Know You will accept it,
for you are the one cares without hesitation,
sinners do I am, You'll still accept me.

Thank you Lord for having an assurance that You'll still Forgive me.

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  • celestial
    March 16, 2007

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    Good

    This poem is good. But watch your spelling. Maid is a person. Made is a verb. But other than that, I knew what was going on. It's very well-written. Good Job