The Mushroom Effect

This place scares me
A humid foregin forest
What is that there?
Can I still act like I dont care?
Things are strange and fancifull
And unseen magic makes my mind dull
...and fulll of scorpions too
What is this? Put me back!
I'm done with love now
I didn't ask for that.

(Ciarán (#1)

Author notes

Anyone recognise a Shakesperian line in this?

A contest entry

For Trophies That Shine Group Only by Angel With No Halo. 700 points, ended March 17, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Angel With No Halo
March 17, 2007

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This was really a great write. You captured a lot of emotion in this one. Thank you for entering and good luck hon

~Krys~
truthfully me
March 16, 2007

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A very nice short poem.
I thought it was very simple and easy to read.
I especially love the last two lines, what a good way to end the poem. Good job, keep writing!