You said you'd always care for me
but that was just a lie;
The times you held me in your arms
the memories make me cry.
I wish we were together still
but torture isn't love;
So choose some dumb bitch over me
I just can't give enough.
You clench your fist around my heart
still beating in my chest;
And squeeze it hard to stretch the pain
that's come since our first kiss.
Emotion's just a toy for you
you love to play your games;
But when I leave you all alone
you always to point the blame.
But I just can't say no to you
I let you have your fun;
And through it all, I love you still
I guess you finally won.
Author notes
I went with the breakup scenario. I wrote this poem a while ago, not one of my best, and overall not that great. Oh well, it fit the contest categories kinda, so I thought I might as well.
A contest entry
- Sadistic Emotions by Never Fall in Love.
650 points, ended April 11, 2007, 76 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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If this isn't your best
I would want to see one of your better ones
Cuz I pretty much Liked this
Probably cuz I relate too well
You said you'd always care for me
but that was just a lie;
The times you held me in your arms
the memories make me cry.This was my favourite part
and therefore I'd think this is an awesome start
You also ended the poem with effect
Which is a great thing
Good Luck in my contest :f
NeveR ♥
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That's weird...I'm sure I've commented on this before...Well, even if I've already commented on this it's still good. Gotta go.
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I have to say this is very sad...there is more too, but I will send it in a note...
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