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The storm came

The storm came and destroyed everything and shattered my hopes into a hopelessness
the leaves of love were scattered and strewn across the place and frozen in time
It had to come and even then people did not leave their selfishness and hatreds
the roads were cleaned and even then they left a patch of hatred in the middle
heartless were they and one couldn't stop the fire as it was too late and the
heart shrivelled into embers of silent pain that dulled the senses and dried
the kernels of hope as the future remained unseen and uncertainties remained
the sun shone nevertheless and seemed to say it's going to be a happy day. 

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  • AnanCat
    July 15, 2008
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    LOVE HAPPY ENDS!!


  • TheDeadMan
    November 14, 2007
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    awesome write. very clean and to the point. keep pennin. peace.