PINKETRON OR
RAINBROW
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think in "PINKETRON," you tried to extend her name into a real surname... pretty funny, but ok. The other thing is maybe, you meant 'PINKITRON' for blending in citrus with her name squeezingly connecting the dots to food. However, I think you got extremely hyper (like Pink does) and misspelled "PINKETRON" either way.
You have captured the shape of a rainbow on the sky with, "RAINBROW" nicely. 'Bow' also means 'bent.' And, so, her food is twisted from the crowd, but if you think about it, the eatery coterie doesn't realize they're the ones who serve bad food usually. Also, rain produces more and more food, and she's eyebrowing ideas so much that she wants a company! This didn't fall off the rollercoaster of criteria.
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