This pain in my head,
it's throbbing.
Not even close
to stopping.
I keep losing weight.
I'll never be free.
Won't someone tell me,
what's happened to me?
The doctors don't know
not many friends care.
I can count on few
to really be there.
In so short a time
I've been shedding the pounds.
Before I got sick I was 123,
now 101.. and it keeps going down.
I'm so sick of the crap,
and I'm sick of the pain.
The doctors still don't know
and make it seem like a game.
I don't mean to freak out
or over react,
but I'm sick of the routine
and everyones act.
You'd think they would care
that they'd be concerned.
Since I've lost so much weight,
but their heads are all turned.
So I'll escape from the madness,
in this world of my own.
If this keeps going on
my heart's sure to turn to stone.
A contest entry
- ANYTHING! Seriously ANYTHING! by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 2, 2007, 75 entries
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Awesome.
This is a great read. I loved it a lot. Wow, great write. I am adding you to the finalists list.
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No! It's alright to freak out! I'd be freakin out too!
And, hey, I care. You can come talk to me anytime. lol
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Good job!
Such a sad situation! I am a nurse, and agree that sometimes it seems as if the doctors just don't know what to say... It is sad that you feel as if you have so few people that care about your health. I hope you will find answers soon, and you will be able to get back to being who you are and to be doing what you want to be doing. I also hope that this experience helps you to hold even closer the friends that are truly there for you! God bless you, and good luck in the contest!
Debi
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Thanks so much.. it really means a lot.
Thank you.
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great poem,i feel sorry for what you going through and i pray that you get through it soon. hopefully they can find out the problem soon,good luck with the contest
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Amazing
awesome poem I really can relate if its about what I think it is my sister recently went through anarexia and it was tough and I think this may have been the same thing she felt -
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Well it's not anorexia actually.. thank goodness cos I couldn't handle it if it were.
Actually they don't know why I'm losing the weight.
Thanks much!!
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Oh man...That's so sad. For what it's worth, I care. This is an excellent display of your feelings and emotions...please don't let your heart turn to stone
Wyattxoxox
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Oh my...
That's not cool. I know what it's like to have friends that really could care less beyond the casual "hello, how are you?" every other day. So this all is seriously happening? No idea if it's food poisoning or some sort of thyroid issue? If they haven't already maybe the doctors should check the thyroid gland... That kinda controls weight- and if you're losing that quick there's some serious trouble.
=] I'm not a doctor myself but I've been around a lot of them psychological and otherwise- that said always feel free to drop me an AP message or otherwise.
AIM: XChrisUnknownX if you'd like to keep in touch internet wise.
Myspace, Yahoo, Skype are all XChrisUnknownX
and e-mail is XChrisUnknownX@si.rr.com
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I care just as much as anyone should (1 to 10 = 11) , but I'm rarely signing on to AP lately, so 'm sorry for the last comment.
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*correction
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wow
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Thanks.. I'm freaking out right now.. so it means a lot.
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Your welcome, you can always talk to me. I'm here for you.
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Thanks.. right now I just need to cool down. I'm ok.
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Your welcome. But if you ever need to talk, just message me.
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I might have to do that one of these days.
Thanks for the umpteenth time..
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Okie dokie
Your welcome
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