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Bitches

Your such a whore
You don't even talk to me anymore
I did nothing wrong
You were pretending to my friend all along
I hope your happy to be a bitch
I blame it on that your spoiled and rich
I don't need you anyway
I don't care what you say
You stabbed me in the back with a knife
So I hate you, have a nice life

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  • UnpardonableSin
    August 21, 2008
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    wow.

    Intense.

    I love this poem!!!


  • Volfeng
    June 4, 2008
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    great piece

    but what do tou REALLY: think? hehehe


  • Volfeng
    June 4, 2008
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    wow


  • Game Master
    March 21, 2007

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    nice, I hope you didn't mean me when you wrote that *backs away slowly* I love the title . . . that's what brought me herebut you're right b*tches these days, makes me sick

  • LaurenLightning--x
    March 20, 2007

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    WoW..

    There is alot of anger packed into that short poem.
    I felt like taking a few steps back from my computer ^.^ I would hate to be the person you're talking about. I love the lines :

    I don't need you anyway
    I don't care what you say

    'cause they show you can move on.
    Also, the rhyming in this poem is very good.

    Well done!! This is a brilliant poem!!

    Bleeding Glitter xX


  • Ethereal-Darkness
    March 20, 2007
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    Oh, and you spit hot fire


  • Ethereal-Darkness
    March 19, 2007
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    Jessy is such a condescending bitch sometimes... Oh well... You still have me

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