1. Pinky's Heavenly Creations
2. Pinky's Palace
3. Pink Dolly's Eatery
4. Pink Dolly's
Slogan
"Eat at ...." The finest foods for all tastes.
Author notes
Please don't use my name in your reviews.
In a list
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Putting something in your account,
I feel that the phonics of your 1st idea is professional, but, the meaning of it is off slightly with Rule #3 because in reality, we don't live in the heavens. I don't like to ignore things, but this one was not really what I'm looking for.
Pinky's Palace is not very unique in the sense that I've seen many variations of it in a few entries of mine. Anyhow, this version turns the notch of the click of the tongue even higher in criteria!
Oh, you want to make sure this isn't a real restaurant in real life, but still something to look into with Pink Dolly's Eatery. I like the "y" added onto "doll," it makes it a little more fun in criteria.
Personally, I like Pink Dolly's Eatery better than Pink Dolly's because it feels finished.
How fun you made your little advertisement for criteria because I had the 'i.e.' insert. I have read that along with my four other criteria in every name except for, Pinky's Heavenly Creations because I think it's too powerful.
It'd be great if you don't reply or rate me, although you can after the contest is judged very soon, but talking through the author notes is an option for one more day!
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heavenly creations name didn't refer to the sky..it was heavenly as in yummy...so how did it not fit?..it was just a name and as for Pinky's Palace it was my idea from my head I do not take others ideas...oh well thanks for comment and contest. I didn't think we had to check if names were currently used anywhere in the world ..I just gave you names I thought of.
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