my mind plays
tricks on me
mostly to save
my sanity
I see you in dreams
but never awake
you take my hands
but I know you're fake
you cutt my wrists
and watch me bleed
you fuck me hard
and plant the seed
a flower grows
not a tulip or orchid
a single black rose
melonchaly and morbid
as the flower wilts
I watch in fright
for I'm wilting too
this is my last night.
Author notes
FYI:whenI said "you plant the seed" I literally meant that you made me fall in love.
*freedom writers*
A contest entry
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Comments
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me likey... me likey indeed
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wow this is really good. It's short but it says so much. beautiful work.
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this is sad! but it was good i like the wording. it has good flow to it as well. great job thank you for entering my contest and good luck to you.
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Aw. Sad. :[
Very emotional; I hope it's not really your last night.
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