She was hurt
1 year ago
She had so much pain
She almost loved him
Did he love her?
They were so happy together
He gave her a note saying I no longer love you
Her heart stopped
A year went by and the wounds were healing
One day she saw something
A dream of him
That he came back
She sees her friends writing looks like his
She remembers how happy she was with him
Her wounds were reopened
She told her friends she was fine
She wasn’t
She feels a heavy heart in her chest
She still feels love for him
Will the pain ever leave her?
What would she do if he did come back?
Author notes
I wrote this poem about my ex, and ive had preminitions that he might come back, while i have a new boyfriend. its prety sad but its the best i have
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Ex's are tough. I had an ex I loved so much.. feelings NEVER died. Well... after about a year and a half of going out sperate ways... we now are dating again.. 5 months tomorrow. Plan for so much more.
Great write. I love the feeling you put into it. It's real.
Awesome.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT. <\33
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