Looking at the Faery Tale life,
not expecting it for myself,
a dream took place within my heart.
My breath was taken by your kiss,
as Romeo and Juliet.
My slipper was returned to me,
as Cinderella and the Prince.
My eyes wakened when you leaned near,
as Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
My love grew deeper within me,
as your heart's beat became as mine.
My soul was connected with yours,
as we lived in Unity's grace.
No Faery Tale ending for us,
as stories told belong in books.
No God Mother to wave her wand,
as magic is what we make it.
No Sequel to make others rich,
as our love encriches all life.
No goodbye when you walk away,
as your words spoken are your truth.
No tomorrow to awaken,
as today is the day we live...
The dream within my heart and yours,
continues through eternity;
it is the ending our dreams make.
A contest entry
- Love.... (5 options) by Kristin Melissa.
700 points, ended March 16, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING! Seriously ANYTHING! by A Murderous Lament.
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yeah, life isn't how we wish it would turn out. great poem. I love the way you wrote it. Awesome write.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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This is great! I love how you have different examples of fairy tales...snow white, cinderella...keep up the good work!
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This is really good! You did spell fairy wrong though... I love the whole poem buit my favorite part is:No Faery Tale ending for us,
as stories told belong in books
Great Job...
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i loved reading this, but i have to admit, i wasn't expecting a love poem at all, if that makes sense. But yah, i loved the reference to romeo and juliet and to the disney movies, who doesnt love reading about disney movies!!! hehe. Thanks for sharing this!
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My breath was taken by your kiss,
as Romeo and Juliet.
My slipper was returned to me,
as Cinderella and the Prince.
My eyes wakened when you leaned near,
as Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
This made me smile. I love Disney movies (hehe) so yeah... It was really touching, nice job relating your creative words to reality. Kudos -
Creative
This is a new twist on fairy tales, I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow nicely and it os a very well written poem. Keep up the good work. ~Angel -
This is great! that theme is used in so many ways, but when people actually use many of them at once, it just makes it that much mroe respectable, to recognize so many f them. this is a great write with tis description and emotion. great job.
Love it all
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grweat
awesome poem
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Creatively refreshing!
I found this piece cute and vivifying. This flows simply easily while the application of literary devices add a great and unique dimension to this piece.
What was your driving inspiration in this masterpiece?
-Keep the ink flowing!
_Dave
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