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what im not

im not preppy

i will not scream or shout

i am not stupid

i will not fall for your tricks

i am not calm

i may kick you in your mouth

i am not one to cry in front of others

if someone dies i do not cry

these are things im not

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  • BittersweetPhantasm
    March 29, 2007

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    heh - this is very simply put. does that reflect your personality as much as the words themselves, perhaps? are you someone who likes to speak their mind and speak frankly?

    well done.


  • Dante DrakenSire
    March 25, 2007
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    That is like so emo.


  • serenity silvermoon
    March 24, 2007

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    this is a very sad poem but im glad i no what your not for it tells me who you are and what you are and im glad because i never want to disjudge someone thanks for sharing i hope we can be friends and i can read more of your great poems i see were in the same group called demons clan God Bless Sign: Di.


  • Laura
    March 24, 2007

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    a very thought provoking poem, which to be honest puts into words what we have at the back of our minds...well done this is brill..
    laura xxx


  • Artemis Gem
    March 18, 2007
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    I like this a lot!
    good flow


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 17, 2007

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    Pleased to make your acquaintance - now I know what you are not, and a bit of what you are. Easy to read and understand what you write in these lines.

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