~by Gregg Rowe~
(Masculine Rhyme -- Final Single Syllable Stressed or SSS)
If by chance, at supper, you saw a fly
Would you grab that leather bound book
Swap it on the head and witness it die
And then go screaming for the bloody cook!
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lol thios is crazy RANDOM!!! just what I wanted for my contest!!!
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LMBO Of course I would scream at the cook. But what good would it do? LOL Enjoyed the read!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Very creative and amusing. Good luck
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Swap it on the head and witness it die
And then go screaming for the bloody cook!
That was funny and intresting.
I loved how you used the cook
at the end. You kill it then
tell someone haha. It made me laugh.
Good job.
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Hmmm. Half funny, almost a limerick or pun feel to it, though there was no fun. The picture itself is interesting. So is that a definition of a masculine ryhme?
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Dean
Would it have been better if i named the poem "There's A Fly In My Soup"!
Gregg
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it was okay. Nothing special. I think I'm missing something though. Idk tell me
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Strawberry
It was nothing to be special, just an exercise to have fun in meter and rhyming and a little humour. I go through these phases once in awhile as exercises just to practice the trade of poetry. Sorry if you were looking for a deeper meaning in the poem.
Gregg
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