You take me by the hand & you pull me up
I raise my head to look deep into those caring eyes
My emoitions spill as from a broken cup
It's been so long but such a beautiful surprise
I feel a smile grow as it forms on my tender lips
"It will be alright now, I'll never let you go"
You promise me the world & no more emoitional trips
"I love you & I swear we will take this slow"
In my chest in feel the unthalling of my frozen heart
Brushing my hair behind my ears, your fingers grace my face
Pulling me into your loving embrace, my heartbeat is off the chart
Everything feels perfect & I honestly believe I've found my place
You have the power to bring my heart back from the dead
The passion has burst into flames from within
For you know, I was barley holding on by a thread
How do I exlain this feeling to you, where do I begin"
A contest entry
- ANYTHING! Seriously ANYTHING! by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 2, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me fall in love with you.... by Poetic-Goddess.
450 points, ended April 18, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful,Great emotion,Imagery was good,The flow was amazing,It's absolutely great!! However I feel as if you didn't read any of my rules at all!!!
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Yeah
Great emotion. I know how you feel. There are NO words to really trule describe love and strong feelings for the person you are with. Great job. Easy read. Love it.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
i love this poem!! Its very deep! Nice 1
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I love this i read it the other night but its absolutely great yay
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