the pressure's on
he's whispering sweet words
got you out of your mind
questioning what you've always been taught
you shouldn't be doing this
this shouldn't be happening
not until you're married anyway
but it's not just him
you want it too
want it with all your heart
oh come on now
don't let this happen
you'll know regret it in the end
besides how do you know he's not using you
after this he could leave you
maybe pregnant and blue
so, tell him
tell him how you feel
tell him you're not ready
tell him your beliefs
and just walk away
save this moment for another day
maybe he won't get what you're saying
he's not worth your time
go find someone else who will treat you like you're worth
Author notes
I'm not christian but I believe in a lot of the stuff they do.. aka no abortion unless it's absolutely nessesary (I know I didn't spell it right)
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Comments
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Easy to say.
Sometimes a man will take a girl who is not ready out because he finds her a challenge, which why a woman should always have an out. Be real enough to know that sometimes a girl cannot tell him how she feels and walk away. Some men take that as a sign she wants him. -
very nice poem. Speaks a lot of truth. Your emotions are displayed very well in this piece. Sadly though, many girls do give in and more often than not, it leads to pregnancies and STDs. This is very thought proving, i can see your thoughts very clearly. Great write and good luck!
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thanks
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