Standing at the top of the mountain, thinking I might fall
I hear in the distance God’s Powerful call.
As I answer with a Prayer, God’s Grace takes over my life
And all is still and calm, within there is no more strife.
I look around and below, at the beauty all around, from here above
And know, that I have been showered, with His Great Love.
A contest entry
- Wheres my Ap Mom by Dark Whispers.
460 points, ended June 28, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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One thing I think all God's people should remember is that in the begginning the world was changed because believers loved each other...
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Seems God does his best work on mountains. Its no wonder we find ourselves climbing as we tell ourselves its for the view. not to look down and see how far we have risen. Somehow you never return to where you were. smile. Excellent, my lady.
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You have penned a lovely poem to go with your picture. Yes God showers His love down upon us everyday. His love rains upon us and washes us clean with hope and faith for tomorrow. This was beautiful!! Thank you for sharing with us. Such a poleasure to read this morning. I need to read something to uplift me and your poem was very inspiring. Thank you. Take care, Sandy rains love from
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This was great! God gives us such peace and serenity and you did a great job capturing the moment. well done, amazing!!!
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A lovely passingof message and from that point, the message was clear. A very good write
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the picture goes wonderfully with this, and the images from this poem are amazing. it was very uplifting and it made me realise all we truly had to be thankful for in life. congrats on your trophy by the way, this poem is well deserving. for being such a short poem it held a lot of pure emotion. great write
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This gives some great imagery. I really like this because it reminds me of giving your life to God. Congrats on the bronze trophy!
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I am not very religous, but this was beautfiul. I don't think I have ever read a poem so beautifully written of religion either. Good write dear poet!
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Oh wow not only is this a beautiful picture but a beautiful write as well! You have really captured what the reader would think to say as soon as they see the picture and you can tell you have really put your heart and emotion into this piece. Nicely done! I'm so happy that you have written this, especially the line "and know, that I have been showered, with His Great Love". Because he is great and he loves us all. Nicely done poet!
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God's Powerfull Call. This is a short poem, and yet it is very strong in the making. I like it alot!
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Very good
The simple beauty of this piece heightens its impact and power. Beautifully crafted and meaningful praise.
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this is lovely.... i need such a mountain to make me aware of life below and above........ and be thankful...
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There is nothing like the peace God can bless upon you.
this is truly and beautiful and inspiring write. thanks for entering -
And all is still and calm, within there is no more strife.
I look around and below, at the beauty all around, from here above
And know, that I have been showered, with His Great Love.
Indeed you are true my friend..this is the love and divne relationship you have shown with this great nature ..I loved your depth and immagery here..just beautiful and loving as well..I can say that only a sensitive heart of the poet can get the notions of the truths stated in this write..you are just fascinating and amazing in your expression..So true my friend....you are revealing the truths here..Indeed a very powerful work is here..
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'God's Powerful Call'.....
he keeps us in all our short comings and knows our weekest times....his pertection is sure and he will never fail us....we are so blessed that he first loved us....and we are left in awww to his great love.....
as always thank you for the lovely read and for sharing it with all of us and of course me too...
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Wow that is very beautiful. I just recently returned from the mountains and when you are standin there lookin over the side you can feel God there. The mountains are very beautiful. there is a calm serinity around you when you are up there.
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Ahhh! The feeling of getting saved is probably one of the best feelings in the world. It's like you see everything for the first time. Thanks for sharing
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This is such a beautiful poem that you have penned. Nature is by far the most wondorous creation of the LORD. To be within nature is to be with GOD Himself. I am sure that we all have felt the presence of GOD and heard His voice call to us at sometime or another in our own lives. You have put into words a most beautiful poem illustrating that sentiment. The picture is absolutely perfect for this. Thank you for sharing this with us all here at AP. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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What a great poem to accompany this picture - it is breathtakingly beautiful. Liked the flow of the poem, the message you share with the readers and the rhythm and rhyme in the lines. Easy to read and understand what you are saying in these lines.
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This had a nice smooth flow and for me it was a wonderful read, certainly my pleasure to read this evening, keep up the good work!
~Tia
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work. God Bless
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this is very good
i like this i feel the fall because i have fell myself and prayed to go i feel you good job
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Thank you very much for the lovely words. May the spirit of the Lord uplift you always. God Bless
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very nice
beautiful photo fits the poem very well. I love being out in nature it always brings ones soul closer to the nature of God. You have penned this feeling well thanks for sharing
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Beautiful
Gosh, this is really beautiful and the picture is awesome. I can actually imagine myself in this. Beautiful Job!
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Divine! A lovely work! It doesn't enforce religion upon anyone, but it is open to all who come.
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Thank you for the comment God Bless
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Wonderful
God is everywhere and if you allow him in he will take away all your toubles, should you stumble and fall he will lift you and carry you for a while.Such a lovely read thankyou.
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Thank you for the comment and God bless
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This is totally beautiful.
So peaceful to read.
It is touching and warming to the soul.
It's calm, & lite & soft caring & loving
all rolled into one.
I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thank you may the Lords love be with you and yours always. God bless.
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A wonderful portrayal of your convictions, in sweet thoughts of the Lord. Well written with a lovely picture to accent the thought. Best wishes!
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looking at the picture and reading this it goes well together and the words are so real like standing on top of the mountain and feeling like you may fall , reminds me of the Lord catching us as we fall and carrying us to the top once again and we seem to need this in our lives every day we need to be picked up over and over again and yes we are showered by his great love and always will be until we finaly enter into the kingdom and never have to leave
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Thank you for the comment God bless.
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Thank you once again. This is my signature on all my correspondence.
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Beautiful.
The graphic was beautiful and this write very lovely. A deeply spiritual piece and one that I am glad to read. As I like to start my mornings off this way.
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