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Entusiasmo/Excitement

Mudanza de tan lento,

Incapaz guardar los ojos se abren,

Agotado tan,

Todo que mezcla junto,

incapaz dormir.

El entusiasmo demasiado,

Espera linada para verlo,

Pensando de ella diaria,

contando los días,

Hasta que nos vemos.

El hablar diario,

Tanto igualmente,

Con todo tan diferente.

Entusiasmo que es contenido,

esperando para oírlo,

Para verlo.

El caer dormido,

El mi preguntarse de la mente.

Día que soña con ese día,

El suspenso unbearable,

Pero debe esperar.

Para nuestros nuestros labios a tocar,

y las manos entwine. 

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Moving so slow,
Unable to keep eyes open,
So exhausted,
Everything blending together,
Unable to sleep.
The excitement too much,
Cant wait to see him,
Thinking about it every day,
Counting the days,
Till we see each other.
Talking every day,
So much alike,
Yet so different.
Excitement being contained,
Waiting to hear him,
To see him.
Falling asleep,
My mind wondering.
Day dreaming of that day,
The suspense unbearable,
But must wait.
For our our lips to touch,
And hands entwine.

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I translated this one from spanish to english. I wrote it myself during my spanish class. Hope you like it.

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  • Paulies Cracker
    April 27, 2007
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    oh my gosh i really liked this!! it was beautiful thank you sooo much!! good luck!