I felt it coming
I felt i'd say to much
Yet in your eyes I felt that love
A heart broken fool falling away
Tiraded hearts yet yell hurray!
Vainquished love now brought forth
Silenced in a heart of yes true love
Deep in my heart I still feel to this day
A warm heathly filling of that day
I met you on the beach
I had seen you on that show
I wanted you for me
Yet I didn't know how
I felt that instant connection
It was running through my veins
Now you lay beside me
A smile all over your face.
A contest entry
- Feed my Ego (Women only) by Blue Eyed and Alive.
590 points, ended March 30, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what ya think and this is for Bryan
Comments
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Great poem
The reasons it didn't get added to the finalist of my contest was the color scheme and the lack of comment...technicalities...but I do not wnat to take away from what is written here. A piece that feels from the heart. Thank you for entering.
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I'm gonna have to disagree with you.. this rocks!!
Therefore it's better than mine..lol.
Wonderful job!!
Good luck!! -
This is just a sweet and lovely poem. I loved how it just flowed. I would like to wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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