As each day goes on
your more in my mind
so much already I plant in my head and remember
so much more I want to share with you
much more I want to explore.
When our day starts
I can't stop looking at you
so much running through my mind
my heart soars higher when we share a touch or a kiss together
when our day ends and we say our good byes
my heart feels broken because I already miss you.
As we said our good bye today
parting with a kiss
starting to feel sad and empty from already missing you
could this be love I feel?
I know I am crazy about you
I'm attracted to you
I'm starting to think
I'm falling in love with you.
Author notes
something just written to miguel about my feelings and emotions for him.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Neat Ending
I like the way your very words seem to fall along with the emotion, pattern and rhythm in this right at the end. Bravo! Wonderfully expressed. -
A Hint of Love :)
I would like to thank you so much for commenting on my poem Just One! It means a lot to get other poets comments. It seems that you are falling in love yourself, and i must say i like your poem. Free verse has always been my thing, and you seem to pull it off wonderfully. i like how you pull your story into your poem, and allow the reader to get the story with a select reference of words. I do hope that you two work out wonderfull (that is of course this is what you are going through!)
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