Your love could make the world better
No matter near or far
The warmth of your love
Can make the coldest night warmer.
With your memories lingering in my mind
Walking silently
I feel I'm not lonely.
Love doesn't bind
It rather makes us feel free.
So when you are always with me
I feel the world better than it was ever.
A contest entry
- What Would Make the World a Better Place Contest by Spiritual Nature.
450 points, ended March 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"No matter near or far
The warmth of your love
Can make the coldest night warmer."
I like the above lines most. And the theme of your poem is also very true, loved ones can make this world a better place for us. An amazing thought you have penned here, well done.
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tender sentiments
Your words express how close you feel to this person. Even though they are far away, you carry their love in your heart. Love does make the world a better place.
Good luck in the contest!
Ethereal Melody
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Thanks a lot for not only reading but also feeling my poem. Thanks again for wishing me luck.God bless you.
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A lovely poem. Love is the answer and always makes our worlds a little better. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
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I am glad to know that you liked this one. thanks for commenting.
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