Love is not loud
so you've got the listen
Love can not be seen
so feel around in the dark to find it
Love is not sweat
so pucker up and deal
Love is not gentle
so put up your dukes and fight for it
Love is not abundant
so be carefull about who you give it to
Love does not feel good
it can hurt more than you may ever know
Love is not forever
so renue as often as possible
Love may not be a lot of things
but my arms are open
hold on cuz it will sting
Love is life
Author notes
i entered this contest and did not know that i could not use one of my old poems so here is one right off of the bat. hope ya'll like it. this is also like the first time i capatalized some letters.
~ love the rain ~
A contest entry
- ANYTHING! Seriously ANYTHING! by A Murderous Lament.
390 points, ended April 2, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice title
I say that cause the first item I left on this site was entitled the same thing. Anyway I can relate to this as well. My favorite lines are the 1st two. You really have to listen closely, to hear love. even though it has the power to envelop everything around you, it's approach is very silent, normally. At least the type that is deep and sincere and long-lasting.
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Like it a lot Hon!
Like it a lot love! Keep goin! Whoo!
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Good job!
I think you did a wonderful job of putting your thoughts into verse. Good job! Good luck in the contest!
Debi
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i love it everyone always talks about the wonderful feelings but hte hutes there too but its still wonderful and beatiful even if theres hurt keep it up sis
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Well-Written
Two words are misspelled: renew and careful. Other than the typos, I really enjoyed this, especially the "put up your dukes and fight for it" part.
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thanks, i entered a contest and i had to make on up off of the bat. thanks for your comment.
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Wow...
This is a new view of love. I'm not sure I agree but hey, I am not in your place to judge that. Check your spelling you have one word "sweat" which I am not sure if you mean "sweet." Good write though. I don't understand the last part of your authors note as well.
A Murderous Lament <\33
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