To feel her body"s warmth against mine
while I long for the tenderness of her kiss
A woman who is so refine
That will bring my heart such bliss
Next to her my heart soars on the wings of a dove
As I long for my heart's emotions to be revealed
Wishing that we will find such love
But in my soul I keep it sealed
Longing for my soul to come alive again
To awaken into a world of such love
Within her eyes I see more than a friend
Hearts soaring on the wings of a dove
How I long for a woman like that to find
But a woman like that is one of a kind.
Author notes
I didn't write this about any certain woman. It's just something which I hope to right when that special woman comes into my life.
A contest entry
- Have it in you? by Hectic Michelle.
600 points, ended December 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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AWWW
a very revealing write about the kind of woman you are wanting in your life.Not just a woman,but a soul mate.A very beautiful piece you have penned.Leaving your desires in dreams.You summed it up in your last line.
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
EXCELLENT!!
This is a EXCELLENT piece of writing! so very
passionate and heartfelt. My favorite line is:
next to her, My heart soars on the wings of a dove.
This is such a BEAUTIFUL line. Thank You for such
a lovely piece of writting.
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beautiful and the woman you wrote this for is very special I'm sure. I can't write sonnets..I've tried and I'm not sure what kind you're trying for here..so I can't really speak as to form.
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