When i'm feeling mad or sad.
I walk into a room of saftey
My room
Where everything I need is at
Listen to the music of calm
Play the strings of relife
Lay in a bed of comfort
I'll come back when I feel good
I'm not quite ready to walk out of this room
I want you to leave me be for longer
Just to clear away my sorrows
And come out proudly and peaceful
I only want to be alone
Until my sences are clear
I'm finally ready to sit with my family
Because i'm quiet happy and sincer
Author notes
This poem isn't really sappouse to rhyme so no need to say much about the schme
A contest entry
- FOR THE KIDS 14 AND UNDER: Inner Peace by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended March 17, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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Good poem. Flow didnt seem off anywhere in particular so that's good. Uh, great message, I always go in my room when I need a safe place so I can relate to thisd poem. Nice job!
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good job
Don't worry about rhyming, kaitlyn; I don't require that in my contests. Nicely done. I could feel the inner peace as I read this. Thanks for entering; good luck.
Brian
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