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I see you
sitting there all alone
why are you sad
you should be glad
all the world
is here to explore
so what if
your parents walked out the door
your better off without them
You love and you loose
but it's their loss
not meant for you to loose
you dont know why
but you must continue to fly
you cant stop the pain
but the happiness
you will gain
will be ten times better
than that of the loss
just dont forget
to brush and floss

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 15, 2007

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    this is good, i like it, you did a great job on this one, the ending as kind of funny, but i like it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest