Everytime I look into your eyes,
I can see the deep stars in the skies.
When I hold you in my arms,
I can feel like I can protect you from any harm.
When we kiss I feel like I’m high.
When we hug I feel like no other guy.
When we talk I fall into a trance.
I would do more with you, but I still can’t dance.
Author notes
This is my heart felt poem to my one and only
A contest entry
- Pay it forward please :) by little-hug.
900 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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that last line was quite possably the funniest thing i've read in a long while lol lol lol LEARN TO DANCE THEN -
very beautful i love it .....simple and beautful at the same time...i love it great write ...
~~~ in love in death
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awww that's so sweet. had a nice flow to it too. good write.




