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For the one I love

Everytime I look into your eyes,
I can see  the deep stars in the skies.

When I hold you in my arms,
I can feel like I can protect you from any harm.

When we kiss I feel like I’m high.
When we hug I feel like no other guy.

When we talk I fall into a trance.
I would do more with you, but I still can’t dance.

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This is my heart felt poem to my one and only

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  • live in love
    May 16, 2007

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    Boy

    that last line was quite possably the funniest thing i've read in a long while lol lol lol LEARN TO DANCE THEN


  • MarimbaMiss
    March 15, 2007

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    very beautful i love it .....simple and beautful at the same time...i love it great write ...
    ~~~ in love in death ~~~~~


  • DrownInImperfection
    March 15, 2007
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    awww that's so sweet. had a nice flow to it too. good write.