Oh dear
oh dear!
its this sickness
that gives me this fear
You see,
I have a choir concert
In Hunnington on the 22nd and 23rd!
And i have a stuffy nose!
Oh boy
oh boy Its a dread!
I hope I will get better by then!
I said
So you readers
Please pray for me
That I will get better
and sing the best I can sing
Its all up to you guys!
Wish me luck!
cause this stuffy nose
really sucks!
Author notes
This All-State Choir Concert is very imortant! You see, like over 30 kids or something auditioned for this and only 3 made it and i was 1 of the 3. This is very honorable and i might not feel right going to Hunnington and being sick and possibly get some kids out of 250 kids get sick!
Will you readers,commenters,and applauders pray for me????
Comments
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I'd wish you luck in getting better but it's already passed the 22nd and 23d. I just hope you don't get sick again anytime soon, especially when things important happen.
Excellent poem, I liked the in-line rhymes that you made... they were very effective. And also, you have a remarkable ability to write about yourself without needing to go to deep into it, yet still allow people to know exactly how you feel.
Great job!
♣Kevan♣
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