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Lonely little girl

verse one-
The days grow colder
As she tries to find a friend
She needs someone to hold her
So she won't run away
When the nights get darker
She needs confort
Such a lonely little girl
Alone in this world

Chorus-
Lonely little girl
Hold my hand
You'll never be alone
Not if you come along
Such a beautiful smile
A beautiful girl

verse two-
She wanders the pavements
Walking to and fro
She has no destination
No place she has to go
Lonely girl
Come with me
I'll hold your hand
If you sing to me

Chorus-
Lonely little girl
Hold my hand
You'll never be alone
Not if you come along
Such a beautiful smile
A beautiful girl

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  • LoveNeverDies
    April 23, 2007
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    thanks for entering


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 11, 2007

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    this was a great write and i can really relate to this poem..your words were very strong, powerful and emotional as well..i really enjoyed reading this poem..keep writting your very talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~