Freckles knot across her nose
Her blue eyes shine with intensity
Will she smile or will she cry?
The paradox of Rachael
When I would give up
Still she goes
She pushes through and
Heaven knows
when Rachael laughs
the whole room glows
Her heart is tender
Her mind is strong
And I'm proud we have
A sisters bond
My love goes with her
Rachael
Author notes
This is not my usual kind of poem, and surely not my best write, but its fun and now I have a present for my little sister who has been feeling very down and lonely lately. Pay it forward is a lovely idea.
A contest entry
- Pay it forward please :) by little-hug.
900 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOVING THOUGHTS SHARED
Heaven knows
when Rachael laughs
the whole room glows....I love this part!
nice to meet you
moon2u
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Thanks! I had forgotten this poem. I was trying to cheer her up. I dont think she went for it much but I tried anyways. Nice to meet you too.
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ahhhh!
your sis will be so pleased with your poem you have written ..nice 1
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Wow! I think it's brilliant! The words, and the beat, and the rhyme... <3
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Ms Sarah, I love this poem. It's light and render with a flow that bounces around my heart. Lucky Rachael --- thank you
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