Crazy, on the brink of starvation
Dazed with drugs, no motivation
Pink razors and cocaine
Heroine and acid rain
Hard rock, heroine white
‘Won’t ever win this bloody fight
Creamy goodness and chocolate galore
Glitter and sprinkles on the floor
Blue hair dye and fake eyelashes
Watch avidly as my outfit clashes
Pink go-go boots in a puddle of blood
Fish-netted arms covered in mud
Vials of Absinthe and buckets of tears
Pouring out my love and fears
Rescue me from my total destruction
Stop my plummeting weight-reduction
Please tell me what you think
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You. Are. My. Idol.
Someday I hope to be able to write like this. But until then I'll just read yours. Normally the "lost" background seems so cliched, but it fits perfect with your poem. I love it. Really.
Blue hair dye and fake eyelashes
Watch avidly as my outfit clashes
Was my favorite stanza.
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i loved this, this was an awesome write and i thought that the last lines ended it nicely, keep writing
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So dark but sweet. I liked it
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"Dazed with drugs, no motivation
Pink razors and cocaine
Heroine and acid rain"
mmmh never done coke with pink razorblades..that's glamourous babyface
hehe.
god the drug thing never gets old.
"Creamy goodness and chocolate galore
Glitter and sprinkles on the floor "
goodness is creamy and im the glitter on the floor you roll around in.
you blowblowblow me like a lollipop.
amazing;
♥
you
-alexsis
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Ohhh baby
Amazing.
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Vials of Absinthe and buckets of tears
Pouring out my love and fears"
♥
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I CHANGED MY MINNNDDDDD. this is my favorite. i love love love it. u better get it published or ill scream. id totally buy ur book! haha
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wow
this is really good and i love the way it is written
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