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E v e r y t h i n g

I can feel you breathe
I can see you adore him
I can hear his sweet
w h i s p e r s
in your
e
a
  r
I can sense his
t
o
  u
  c
    h
on your
s k i n
    smell the
      pleasure
and feel your heart leap.
I know it's sort of none of my buisness
but how can I help it
if we share one soul?
that we are connected?
so please don't be mad at me
when you find that
I know
e v e r y t h i n g

Author notes

Okai so I'm sorry this will probably be hard to understand

you wouldn't really know the situation unless you were in it

so how about you just let the poem give you it's own meaning?

Because I don't really want to tell you.

Comment or I'll hunt you down and gut you like a fish

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Comments

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  • Animay
    September 15, 2007

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    i read the other comments and yea i dont get it but this is good, must be something amazing though the others love it

  • HugsForEveryone
    June 30, 2007
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    ok

  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 5, 2007
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    wow!

  • Kyoku Luv
    April 3, 2007

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    Alright...even though I know your totally p-oed at me right now but I just have to comment on this...

    I cant get this poem out of my head. I truly cant. It's allll I can think about it.
    I think that's because of that fact that it's about me, the fact that you truly do know everything that scares the shit out of me, and the fact that it's an amazing poem.

    I just....love it. And it feels like I shouldnt love it but....I do. I adore it...I just cant stop reading it. This is my...fith time reading it? Maybe I've read it more? I dont know.

    I.just.cant.stop.
    *reads it again*

    It's just....great.

    So yeah...I just HAD to comment you on this...x.x I would have died if not....x.x

    So again....I'm sorry and yeah....

    Wonderful poem.... *reads one last time...tonight*

    The applause looks way too happy....x.x

  • Kyoku Luv
    April 3, 2007
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    Ohmigod....
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