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Fucking Bleeding Hearts

I wish I never knew,
of the love and pain that would ensue.

I wish I hadn't asked,
the answer like a cock up my ass.

I wish I couldn't feel,
and had stopped this demon's deal.

Fucking my eye sockets till morn.
Bleeding just avoid that bitch scorned.
Hearts die/lie as if never warned.

I wish I had a hack saw,
cut out this heart once and for all.

I wish I had a shotgun,
blow out my cardia just for fun.

I wish I had a nickel,
each time I felt that cold trickle.

Fucking get out of my bruised head.
Bleeding from my eyes as I read.
Hearts are useless until you're dead.

Author notes

"You can close your eyes to reality but not to memories"

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  • k2vet
    April 6, 2007

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    dark. Fits into the contest title very well. good poem. Clever and well writern.It's one of those poems that you love and dislike at the same time Good write well done


  • EMOtionalDARKness17
    March 18, 2007
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    Holly shit gurl i love it. SO moving and deep and dark. Good write!