A tenative step,
A snort, then another.
The shy little colt
Steps out with his mother.
His feet touch the clouds
A most peculiar sight!
The little colt is now ready
To take his first flight.
His wings spread out slowly,
His heart all aflutter.
The colt glances up
To look at his mother.
She gives him a nod
Up, up, up, he goes
His front feet directly,
in front of his nose!
He hears his mother's call
And turns back with a sigh.
But never will he forget
His very first flight!
A contest entry
- The Enchanted Realm Members Only !!!! by Darc Soul.
450 points, ended March 29, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Amazing
flow was awesome,rhythm and rhyme were great.The piece was easy to read and painted a wonderful picture of Pegasus looking back on his first flight into life.
Great Write
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
Cute. Pegasus reborn. Love it Hon
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