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Journey

Journey 

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Beneath the mainsail willow for you I wait

softly the breeze carries my name on your lips

it's my only wish that you not be late

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Together we will sail on elfin ships

hand in hand we will pass under starlit skies

with wind tossed seas our vessel of love clips

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In your arms I listen to albatross cries

my only longing in your eyes is found

deeper into you and sad memory dies

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Your tender word is the only sound

to you I will be eternally bound

 

 

 

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  • PoetsAngel
    June 24, 2007

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    As I read these word my heartbeat increased, I felt a deep connection but not mine, yours, a kindred feeling between you and another...beautiful sentiment in these words


    Cathy


  • Never Fall in Love
    March 21, 2007
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    speechless


  • Sacrificial Love
    March 16, 2007
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    Smiling...

    sweet love....

  • Eulb kcalB
    March 15, 2007
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  • Eulb kcalB
    March 15, 2007
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    beautiful and very meaningful piece , it was well enjoyed

    Jamila


  • PerVirtuous
    March 15, 2007

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    Deep as the blue sea!

    I am always captured by how well you can put deeper meaning into simple phrases. I sincerely hope your journey is smooth sailing on calm waters. The beauty of your mind translates well into Elfin fantasy poems. I always get a huge smile. Three magical bunnies for you who are all trained salts!


  • JohnnyD gold member
    March 15, 2007

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    Amera,

    Now this is what can be described only as a 'darling' poem. Perfectly done for both young and old. ahhhhhhhh, so very sweet, like berries and cream, which right now reminds me of your sister! LOL!

    But yeah, this was really cute, you need to do a book of these



    Dad


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 15, 2007

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    Wonderful Write!

    I see deeper meaning here dear Amera..The albatross is often a sign of sadness and the lost and dying..: "To you will I be eternally bound"...this journey of life,with dear ones there is a bond stronger than life..as it says "love is stronger than death"...Our friendships on our journey,brings us to many special soul mates we love and cherish, and you have shared here,what that means....eternal friends.....Wonderful write!


    • Amera gold member
      March 15, 2007
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      I'm impressed.

      • JohnnyD gold member
        March 15, 2007
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        when it comes to soul mates, well love, adoration and respect does transcend death. All of us are part and parcel of it, most do not consciously remember although some are fortunate enough to do so. It is an overwhelming experience to meet one for the first time. For in life there is the feeling of instant 'infatuation' for someone you might meet who matches your psychological criteria for a mate, but a soul mate, ahhhhhh,
        that is such a different feeling...it is a feeling of deep familiarity and 'aboutness' and the feeling actually 'holographs' itself outside your being and envelopes the other. if it happens to you, which I suspect it will, you will remember this conversation. When? Who knows. My first one I was 50, my second 59. I never expected the first one as it just took so damn long...but worth every second of waiting. The second one shocked me, I am one lucky fella to know two at this point in my life. (Woulda been nice if one wasn't married at the time ya know? LOL!) But, there is obviously a 'reason' for all that. ????

        Dad


  • blueyez
    March 15, 2007

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    this is so cute! My very favorite elf

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