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The Sin (acrostic/sedoka)

to witness it all
here in this secluded room
evidence to lusts powers

Sold to only me
in secret, a contract signed
not to tell about...the sin

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its about a cheater, cheating is something i have alot of passion against, so writing about it comes easy to me

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  • HerbalGoat
    March 31, 2007

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    This is a very deep and sad piece, due to the subject matter being dark and sad. I'm sorry if this has happened with you and that's why you have so much passion again it. You write about it so well, though..