1. Family of Pink
2. Mother Nature's Kitchen
3. Kids in the Kitchen
4. Four Season Delights
Author notes
Please don't use my name in any comments. Thanks!
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A fast comment not for fast food, ha-ha
A refresh statement to know that the cafeteria doesn't open up that it's a bar or any of that... just "Family of Pink." And, her own clan is with her most of always.
I tried to make sure Rule #3 was clear enough, but "Mother Nature's Kitchen" is opposite my pleasures of real things. I take personification as being part of fiction too.
Rhythm time with, "Kids in the Kitchen!" Now, this describes that this business isn't too ugly and musty for kiddies to be around. I admire you harmonizing with Pink bringing her sons & daughters inside for being close in relationship and for home schooling to process. It is also for impression without impatience if a younger one takes the time to help make a tasty meal sometimes.
How charming that you put "Four Season Delights" as your fourth name! This, I like as well because it's a health food restaurant, they don't just add the good things in the Summer time but daily and hourly! Just a note on my criteria here that it was a tich long but still ok!
My point principles were fine and fun!
I mark this tickling for a lot of the names,
Daisy -
I like your ideas. They are fresh and clever. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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amazing
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