When you said good-bye
and I asked you why,
you looked up at me
and smiled and cried.
You know, for you
I'd do anything
just to see you smile,
just to wash your frown away.
For you, I would
give up my world.
For you, I would
fly up high, up high.
Because for you I would,
forever cry and cry.
For you, I would
never say good-bye.
So when you walked away,
I asked for you to stay.
And when I grabbed your hand,
you asked me to understand.
Without me you,
would have nothing to live for.
But our lives are two,
and just wouldn't let us go.
For you, I would
give up my world.
For you, I would
fly up high, up high.
Because for you, I would
forever cry and cry.
For you, I would
never say good-bye.
Good-bye...
good-bye...
good-bye...
good-bye...
And forever we could stay,
here above this earth.
All I ask is for you
to show me what its worth.
I'd do anything,
just to hear you say you love me.
And when you take my hand,
I know you'll always be with me.
For you, I would
give up my world.
For you, I would
fly up high, up high.
Because for you, I would
forever cry, oh cry.
For you, I would
never say...
ever say...
never say...
good-bye...
A contest entry
- Round Two by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended May 21, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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Yes, this is better, I like the repetition, though it might have been a little much. Consider just repeating twice? IDK Nice work though, and thanks for entering.
