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The Heroine of My Dreams

You are the heroine,
Of my dreams,
Everything that you do,
Is seemingly perfect.

You take me to far off places,
Where we can be ourselves,
Away from everyone,
Just the two of us.

We can go anywhere,
Anywhere we want to go,
It's up to us,
To take an adventure.

An adventure away from real life,
Into the surreal life,
Everything that happens here is amazing,
It's unexplainable.

It's anything that you've ever imagined,
It's us together forever,
It's the moment when we first realized,
What we could have.

Whenever I'm unsure,
You come to save me,
To take me back to that place,
Where you can be,
The heroine of my dreams.

You are my heroine,
And I want to be your hero,
I want everything in the world,
To take you to that place,
Where real life gets lost,
In the surreal life.

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  • Ice queen 17
    March 21, 2007
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    this is really cute i love this work you did a nice job. good luck thnks so much for entering


  • Dead Star--x
    March 20, 2007

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    thats so sweet and cute.. a true love poem at its best! thanx for entering & good luck!!
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  • the oleander
    March 20, 2007

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    Wow...

    Wow man, thats so kick ass... I love your style... its so... full of desire and longing... I think you did wonderful and I hope you keep you the good work! ~*The Oleander
    P.S. Keep in touch