1.Naturally Pink
2.Pinktopia
3.The Doll House
4.Pink whisper's
5.Nutty Pink's
6.Lady Pink's
Author notes
Please don't use my name in your reviews.
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lively Interpretation
TY for this lovely piece added to my competition!
Curious if you know "Naturally Pink" was used in my 1st finalist. If you want to read my feelings for that one, please go look at that entry and see my comment. You don't have to review it, just find my perspective on "Naturally Pink" if you're interested.
Your second one is very delightful and a beautiful choice. It is another way of saying Pink's Region etcetera, but tastefully better. To me, I think it reads better with either making "Pinktopia" two words or putting a dash in-between words. It was professional in my criteria even in a slurred speech of a child!
3.The Doll House has a pleasant movie-like feel to it, which can be a nice invitation for feed... but, that's not what I'm searching for.
The 4th is very interesting and has connotations of acceptation. For instance, the apostrophe being included states to step inside to know what the 'Pink whisper is.' The phonics sound of plural leaves the meaning to me that there'll be small dishes of everyone wanting a little bit of this and that. Whistles also come from your mouth which is in the same category as food! Criteria's good.
Ha - Ah, "Nutty Pink's" got my attention for creativity especially if you combined the definition, "very or excessively interested, excited" with another, "full of flavor or zest" for comfort to be brought in through slimness. I smiled at how criteria went for this one.
My rating on "Lady Pink's" is: Well, now, I enjoy the individualizing and the quick info that she is a girl before you even go to the interior, LOL. Based on subtle royalty, she'll have to make some rules as the owner, but they'll be under circumstances she follows herself. I swipe my criteria by this one without smirking at all.
Ok, I hope you had fun knowing that I finally came and did more than just view you after a month. The only thing is please remember to not rate or reply though talking in the author notes is absolutely fine if you like.
My mood isn't falling from the good side,
SplishSplashPencil is my name
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