Riding in my car
Everything is perfect now
Dim headlights in the distance
Cruising down the road
After dark with the starlight
Rolling downtown in my car
Author notes
Nope, other than that was a nice challenge. Can't wait for what's next....
A contest entry
- Acrostic Sedokas {edit} by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended March 31, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I see you have taking my advice with the typo, so you're still in it.
I really liked this. Sometimes I wish I didn't choose the sedoka form becuase I think you would have down well with elaborating on this poem, and if you do it some day, let me know!
Other than that, it was a great poem and it was fit for the contest. Thanks for taking my challenge. -
First line, second set, typo: "cruising"
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neat
good write, its kool
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